Homework (16/08/2017)

Outline

1. Who was/were involved in the story?
The man with a broken leg, my friends and myself.

2. What happened?
The man asked us for money.

3. Where did the story happen?
The restaurant on Tonson Road.

4. When did the story happen?
Last month, at about 8 p.m.

5. How did it happen?
- My friends and I were having dinner at the restaurant on Tonson Road.
- A middle age man with a broken leg came to us.
          
           Why did he come to us?
          -He asked us for money.
          -My friend gave him some money.  
          - He was angry.
         
          Why was he angry?
          - He wanted more money.
          - He thought we were trying to ridicule him.

6. How did the story end?
He left us and walked to another table.
 
Story
A man with his broken leg

 Last month, there was a stranger who made me and my friends shocked for a moment. While we were having dinner in the restaurant on Tonson Road at about 8 p.m. Then, there was a middle aged man with a broken leg walked straight to our table and asked us for money, so my friend gave him some money. But he said “Thank you man, you can pay so much for other things but you gave me a little bit of money, I’m so appreciate”. After we heard his words we all were stunned. And then we smiled to him. But he got angry and asked “Why do you smile like that?” We were stunned again. He thought we were trying to ridicule him. But we said sorry and explain to him that we didn’t mean to ridicule him. Finally, he left us and walked to another table. Two week later, we went to that restaurant and met him again. But we ignored him and don’t give him money anyway so he left and went to another table.







         





Comments

  1. Supapan Saiprasertsri12 September 2017 at 08:01

    You should create the name of the story and I hope the event will not happen with me. I give you 9/10.

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  2. Unknown15 November 2017 at 23:58

    Such a weird story for me ! I hope I won't find the situation like that. So I give 10 points.

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  3. kittikarn16 November 2017 at 01:15

    That was such a strange situation for you. I love your writing so much, but i could notice one little mistake from your writing.
    From the sentene - two weeks later- You forgot to put "s" after the word "week".

    I give you 9/10

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  4. Unknown16 November 2017 at 02:54

    Great! I love this and your passages is interesting i give you 10 points.

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