Describing my friends
My girls
This picture was taken last year when my friends and I went
to the party together.
Supapan is on the far right who wears a striped dress and glasses. She is a tall girl who has nice curly hair and nice teeth, that's why her smile so beautiful. Supapan is a dog lover. For instance, one day she saw a thin dog on the side of the street looked tired so she gave it her water and touch it gently. Her heart is so beautiful. In addition, she is a very creative girl. She can draw the picture, paint and write the fiction when she had a free time.
The next person is Kittikarn, she is a tall girl with beautiful upturned eyes and wears a short cream dress, standing next to Supapan. She has a well-built and straight black hair. Kittikarn is the clever student in my class, she always gets high score and she knows a lot about general knowledge.
The last person is Kittima who wears a black skirt, she is a stocky girl but very cute. She has a fair complexion, curly hair, small eyes and her cheek is chubby. She looks like a cute Chinese girl. Kittima is like a fashionista of my gang because she can make up very beautifully and she always update about trend. For example clothing, bags and make up. Moreover, her hand writing is so lovely and I like it so much.
Although, we all are differrent but we can be good friends from now on.
Supapan is on the far right who wears a striped dress and glasses. She is a tall girl who has nice curly hair and nice teeth, that's why her smile so beautiful. Supapan is a dog lover. For instance, one day she saw a thin dog on the side of the street looked tired so she gave it her water and touch it gently. Her heart is so beautiful. In addition, she is a very creative girl. She can draw the picture, paint and write the fiction when she had a free time.
The next person is Kittikarn, she is a tall girl with beautiful upturned eyes and wears a short cream dress, standing next to Supapan. She has a well-built and straight black hair. Kittikarn is the clever student in my class, she always gets high score and she knows a lot about general knowledge.
The last person is Kittima who wears a black skirt, she is a stocky girl but very cute. She has a fair complexion, curly hair, small eyes and her cheek is chubby. She looks like a cute Chinese girl. Kittima is like a fashionista of my gang because she can make up very beautifully and she always update about trend. For example clothing, bags and make up. Moreover, her hand writing is so lovely and I like it so much.
Although, we all are differrent but we can be good friends from now on.
I give you 10/10. You can put everything on one paragraph and the story still interesting and easy to understand. Good job!! :D
ReplyDelete"make up" should be "makeup" in lines 12 and "hand writing" should be "handwriting" but i love you story and i love myself. Haha. Your point 10
ReplyDeleteYour explanation is so interesting and you can describe your friends clearly. I like your writing. So I give you 10 points.
ReplyDeleteI love how you use the the words to describe people. Your writing is awesome.
ReplyDeleteI give you 10/10