Two Perfect Guys

Father and Son
            This is the picture of a handsome father and his cute son. The father is teaching his son to eat food by himself.  
            The handsome father who wears short-sleeved light blue T-shirt with his tanned complexion is David.  He has short straight dark brown hair and pointed nose in his early thirties. David is a creative architect, he always design furniture in his house. For example, chairs, beds and designed his house by himself as well. He is very punctual because he never goes to work late. Moreover, He good at sport, he is the best football player and he exercise every day with his wife and son. That’s why he looks smart.
            The little boy is Tom who is very cute and clever of his thirteen years. Tom has a fair complexion, nice curly light brown hair and twinkling blue eyes. He is very intelligent boy because he always gets grade A in every subject that he took. In addition, Tom is a good son for his parents. For instance, he will help his mom do housework after he has finished his homework. Everyone thinks both of them are the most perfect man ever and every girls desire this type of her husband.


Comments

  1. Unknown15 November 2017 at 22:50

    You can describe them clearly and easy to understand when i read i will smiles in the same time. Your point 10

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  2. Supapan Saiprasertsri15 November 2017 at 23:04

    You can describe the man and the young boy interestingly. In my opinion, you should decide the paragraph's topic to be a better one, but everything is good. I give you 10.

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  3. Unknown16 November 2017 at 01:16

    Such a handsome dad and lovely little boy! When I read this passage, it can make me imagine about how they are. Your writing is so great. So I give you 10 points.

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  4. Unknown16 November 2017 at 01:16

    Such a handsome dad and lovely little boy! When I read this passage, it can make me imagine about how they are. Your writing is so great. So I give you 10 points.

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  5. kittikarn16 November 2017 at 01:23

    Your writing is very good. You can describe people very clearly.
    I give you 10/10

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