My Favorite Place

My Favorite Place



My favorite place is Cha-Am Beach. It is a clean and beautiful. This place is very popular in Thailand among lots of tourists came to visit this beach all the year. Cha-Am Beach is located in Phetchaburi. I like to go there with my family or sometimes with my friend because it is the nearest beach that I often visit. We will spend only 2 hours by using our own car but another way is train. I think the train is the good choice because it is more exciting and cheaper than using a private car. Cha-Am Beach is surrounded by tall pine tree. When I was there I will ride a bicycle or walk along the beach with my bare foot to take a deep breath to absorb the fresh air and smelt a slight smell of the sea that filled my lung to feel fresh. I love a song of birds when they for me, it made me feel like I am a princess are waiting the prince by the sea shore.   While I was having dinner with my family I saw a big blue whale swimming in the sea and a big crab dancing gently on the rock. How cute they are! After finishing dinner, I tasted the sweet coconut, it is very tasty and I actually love it. Sitting on the shore waiting for sunset is the best moment for me. I touched the smoothing sand, it not to hard so I can sit comfortably for long time. All of these made me feel actually very relaxed. I often go to Cha-Am beach  2-3 times a year maybe on Holiday or after examination.

Comments

  1. Unknown15 November 2017 at 22:45

    Great! but your topic aren't interesting and "waiting" should be "waiting for" in lines 8. Your point 9

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  2. Supapan Saiprasertsri15 November 2017 at 22:59

    How's perfect of your work! Believe me, I can touch everything that you are touching by reading your work. I give you 10.

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  3. Unknown16 November 2017 at 00:51

    Your writing is so great. But I find some mistake in line 2. I think it would be better, if you rewrite "come" instead. So I give you 9 points.

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  4. kittikarn16 November 2017 at 01:28

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  5. kittikarn16 November 2017 at 01:29

    Your writing is good but i could notice some little mistakes.
    I think it would be better if you use the word " come" instead of " came "
    And you forgot to put the word " sing" in the sentence - I love a song of birds when they for me.

    i give you 8/10

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